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Category: Adult



"Open it in the bedroom," says Finch, handing Delia the long giftbox.  "It's just some of our old toys.  Anything you don't want to use tonight, remove.  If there's something else you do want, put it in.  I'll join you in ten minutes."

       *        *        *        *

Delia stands by the bed..  Finch looks in the opened box.  The paddles still there, one lightweight wood, the other leather. So is the martinet and the bottle of lube.  Missing is the whippy cane.  Also the gauzy blue knickers he picked out, but he is sure that Delia is wearing them under her robe.

She has added two items:  the vibrating egg and her pink towel, rolled neatly lengthwise.  So considerate, Finch thinks; things might get a bit messy.

       *        *        *        *

"Oh, Mr. Finch," Delia coos, "I've been very bad."

"And?"

"I need to be punished."

At his command, she brings the paddles, stands before him, lets the robe slip to the floor. Finch slides a finger inside her knickers.  She is already moist.

"Very bad indeed," he says pulling her across his lap.

He warms her up with his hand till her bottom is nicely pink and she is purring, then switches to the wooden paddle for more sting.  Each sharp crack elicits a high-pitched "oh" of surprise, pain, and pleasure

The leather paddle is more serious. She pants when it lands, tries to squirm away. Finch holds her.  "Please," she begs.  But she doesn't safeword.  Finally, he stops.  Delia slides to the floor.

Finch stacks the pillows at the corner of the bed and arranges Delia over them, her legs splayed.  He plucks the martinet from the box.  The thongs rain down rhythmically.on Delia’s deep red bottom. She grinds her hips against the pillows.  Finch flicks the tips of the martinet against her exposed sex.  She gasps, her fists clutch the sheet. He does it again to show it was no accident. “You bastard,” she says.  In answer, he snaps the thongs wickedly across her bottom several times.

"Bastard," she repeats.  He laughs.

"Stay there," he says when he has finished.  He shows her the lube.  "My last item.  What's left  you can use."

"However I want?"

"Yep."  He smooths the lube on, inserting one finger, then two, into the tight, hot opening.  Then his cock.  When he is fully inside, he starts to pump.

"Slowly," she moans.  The pace increases.  "The egg," she pants.

She presses it against her clit, the frenzy mounting, mounting, until they both come, noisily, ecstatically, copiously.

       *        *        *

"Use this," he hands her the folded  towel.  It seems oddly stiff..

"However I want?"

"Yep."

She strokes it suggestively between her legs.  "You shouldn't have used the martinet like that, darling," she says.

"Too bad, but we agreed -- whatever's in the box.  Anyway, it's too late now."

"Not quite," says Delia, unrolling the towel.  Inside is the crop.  She taps the bed with it, then points meaningfully to the stacked pillows.

"But," Finch stammers

"However I want," she smiles, "you bastard."

Readers Comments:
CK:  CrimsnKid6 (at) aol (dot) com

This is partly my primarily F/M orientation speaking, of course, but nonetheless…Terrific story! The description is a nice mixture of exposition and eroticism, detailing both what's happening and the sexually-charged reactions of the participants in this game involving toys, of both spanking-oriented and more vanilla varieties.

A woman outsmarting and outmaneuvering her male partner by subterfuge to take her revenge on his posterior for the punishment he's dished out on hers (and briefly another part of her anatomy too), even when he seems to be in control of the situation and the rules are all in his favor, that's a diabolically delicious twist ending.

I'm undoubtedly a bit biased here because this narrative features a couple of my favorite spanking-related plot elements, but I nevertheless give this story top marks.

Alex:  alexbirch (at) blueyonder (dot) co (dot) uk

Now this one I found very difficult to review and mark in that I had ambivalent feelings about it. I loved the writing style, enjoyed the deeply sexual descriptions of some one who is clearly comfortable with the genre, enjoyed the build up to………..a finale I had kind of predicted from the off.  That's no crime, stories are not expected to provide trick endings all the time, but somehow, I don't know why, I was left with a flat 'so what?' sort of feeling.  I enjoyed the writer's clearly considerable talent in constructing the tale but, as a spanking story to excite, it didn't pull up any trees for me.

Steven:  js (at) smilingwithteeth (dot) com

I liked this story as the author showed a deep love and caring between the two players.  The only gripe I have is the way everyone seems to borrow from Anne Rice by using the word "sex" for genitalia. I thought the ending had a very cute twist to it.  I think the author should have given a little description of what the two characters look like, but with only 500 words to play with, I know that can be tricky.

Kris:  worsci (at) webtv (dot) net

The author told a fully fleshed, complete story withing the word limit.  The ending was a nice switchy twist.