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The Bet
Peter Martin

pmartin242003 (at) yahoo (dot) co (dot0 uk

Category: Adult

Claire opened her front door.

"Hi Janie, come in. Did the boys get off to University ok?"

"Sure did."

Claire said "At least my Danny got over his spanking."

"Spanking?"

Claire explained. "It was his own fault. I grounded him but he begged to be let off so he could play in the football match yesterday. I told him I didn't have grounding and the like when I was younger and got a spanking. He begged me to spank him instead."

"So you did?"

"He went on and on about it. So I gave in and put him across my knee."

"What did you use?"

"Oh, my hand and my wooden backed hairbrush, on the bare."

"Cool. So you better go and get the hairbrush."

"Why?"

"The bet." Janie was laughing.

"What bet?" Then suddenly realisation spread across her face. "But that was 18 years ago" she stammered. "At post natal clinic"

"So you remember now? Exactly. We were both adamant we wouldn't spank our kids. You suggested the bet. Whichever one of us spanks our kids first gets spanked by the other one." She was still laughing.

"You're not serious."

"Too right I am. Now get that hairbrush young lady"

"I'm 39 years old."

"Go get it. A bets a bet." Janie said more sternly.

Claire left the room and came back a few moments later holding the hairbrush.

"Good girl. Right, skirt and knickers off and across my lap please."

Claire nervously gave the hairbrush to her friend, removed her clothing and bent across her lap.

Ten minutes later Claire's bottom was bright red and she was sobbing.

Janie rested a few moments and Claire relaxed. Janie asked softly "you lied about forgetting the bet didn't you Claire."

"Yes" came the mumbled reply.

"Thought so." Then added "and you didn't really spank Danny did you?"

"No."

"You liar. How dare you manipulate me like that." Janie snapped, increasing the tempo of the spanking making Claire cried hysterically..

Janie let Claire calm down and said quietly "You can get up now Claire. I got a bit carried away, huh?"

Janie watched her friend rub her reddened and bruised bottom, with her beautiful tear stained face. "That's OK Janie, I guess. I'm so sorry."

"No need to be sorry you silly girl." Janie stood up and hugged her friend, kissing her on her cheek.

Claire moved her head and kissed Janie on her lips. Janie took Clare's face in her hands and kissed her back, easing her tongue in to her friends welcoming mouth.

They looked deeply in to each others eyes, both smiling. Both knowing. They held each other as they walked to the bedroom.

Afterwards as they lay in each others arms, Janie asked "Will you lie to me again?"

"I'm a persistent liar actually" Claire answered with a broad grin.

"Then I will be spanking you again in future." Janie said sternly, laughing.

"For lying?" Claire asked, pouting.

"Yes, because we both want you to" Janie answered.


Readers Comments:
Mary:  gemcollector2001 (at) yahoo (dot) com

An interesting plot to this story, with lots of twists to keep the reader from discovering to quickly just exactly how its going to end. Even though the "spanked for being a liar" isn't to new so far as stories go, the way that it is presented here is one that I haven't seen before myself.

I enjoyed reading this and got a few laughs with each turn in the plot.

Steven:  js (at) smilingwithteeth (dot) com

I liked the premise of this story although the timing portion didn't work for me.  I take it Claire's son is 17 years old so the spanking claim was obviously a lie, which is fine. But would Claire be thinking about this bet for 18 years and not act upon it until now? And would Janie really remember such a bet and focus on it too?  Spanking stories are so very difficult to write since quite often there are portions of the plot that are too difficult to believe as possibly being true.  Did Claire and Janie marry, have children yet still be bi-sexual all these years?

That aside the story was fun to read and I enjoyed it which to me is most important.

Grace:  gracebracken98 (at) yahoo (dot) com

I like the spanking lesbian twist to the story. The overlay of kinks here makes for an interesting interplay. Also, there's something oddly compelling about an 18-year-old boy begging his mother for a bare-bottom spanking. Worked for me. I would have liked a bit more build-up of Claire and Janie as housewives and empty nesters, so that their "coming out" at the end would have more whiplash for the reader. Also, I wish Claire had provided a bit more vicarious description of her son's spanking, which (since it was imaginary) would provide another window into Claire's psyche.

Kris:  worsci (at) webtv (dot) net

Oh, liars deserve such a hard spanking!  And then hot sex, of course. But we got to see neither in this story, as it was just built up to and then mentioned.  Well, who wants to read about the humiliation of being bum up over someone's knee, anyway?  Or get the nasty details of someone softly rubbing an achy behind in comfort?