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| Twin Tracks Alex Birch alexbirch (at) blueyonder (dot) co (dot) uk Category: Adult
Cautionary note : This story does contain some rather graphic sexual fantasy so potential reviewers and newsgroup readers have been forewarned. "Ah Miss Forrest, I assume. You're here to interview for the post of my PA. Please sit down." (Oh my God! He's even better looking close to. I'm going to cream my panties just looking at him!) "Miss Forrest? (quizzical) You may sit down." (Blushing) "I-I'm sorry Sir - I'm a little nervous." (Sits hurriedly, hunched and waiting) (Smiles reassuringly) "That's fine, Miss Forrest, I understand. Now there's no need for 'Sir', Mr Whittaker is just fine…and may I call you 'Susan' ?" (Oh I'd rather call you 'Master'. You can just call me 'Cunt' if you like!) "Y-yes Si- er Mr Whittaker, that's fine." "Now, Susan, I assume you've read the basic job specification?" (Oh yes, Master, it's to serve your every need. Like right now I want to crawl under the desk, take your cock out and suck you until you come in my mouth!) "Susan?" (Clears her throat and stutters) "Yes, S- Mr Whittaker, I'm sorry I was just making sure I'd remembered everything before answering." (Chuckles) "Well, very thorough, but I don't expect you to have memorised it. Now much of the work involves being my public relations aide, Susan. That means being the face my visitors see, making them comfortable while they're waiting. Can you do that?" (Oh yes, Master. But I know I'll screw up on purpose..and then I'll have to strip naked in front of them so you can cane my bare bottom for forgetting to tell you they'd arrived.) "Susan? You look very hot and feverish. Are you not well?" (Blushing madly) "I-I'm sorry..I'm fine, Mr Whittaker. It's a little hot in here. Could you open the window, please?" "Of course, I'm so sorry. There..is that better?" (Thank you, Master, I don't deserve your kindness. Tie me up and spank me!) "Y-yes much better, thank you…and yes I'm sure I can manage that side of the work, Mr Whittaker." "Good, good. You certainly have the looks. I'm just a little worried about your self confidence." (Concentrate, you idiot!) "Oh no, Mr Whittaker, I know I sounded hesitant but with the heat and ..er..it's one of those days when a girl doesn't feel so good (always works)..I-I'm sorry, I so want this job!" "Ah, of course, Susan, I quite understand. I'm glad you were open about it. Well let's see now. The job also contains a high element of trust. There will be information I impart to you which will not be public knowledge…." (..like the way you love a girl to open her bum cheeks so you can inspect her botty-hole for cleanliness and then punishing her pussy and bum hole with a strap if she's been a dirty girl…?) "..so I will be very reliant on your discretion. Needless to say there will be occasions when I need to get the whip out…Susan…Susan? Oh Christ! (Grabs phone in a panic). Who is the first aid officer on this floor? I think she's fainted!" |
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| Steven:
js (at) smilingwithteeth (dot) com Minor quibbles: One sentence that needed to be corrected, and the word come used when cum would have been correct. The word "cunt," which I simply do not like, although I do love the late great George Carlin. This was a very cute story and the ending had me laughing. Very well done. |
| Mary:
gemcollector2001 (at) yahoo (dot) com This piece reminded me a bit of the movie The Secretary for some reason. LOL perhaps it was the nature of her fantasy. The story itself was a bit difficult to read due to the nature of the real life verses her fantasy. However it didn't detract all that much from the reading of it. I think the author did a good job of describing a situation that I am sure some of us have come across in our lives of "the cute boss you would like to be spanked by" LOL |
| Grace:
gracebracken98 (at) yahoo (dot) com The use of parentheses to express inner thoughts seems to work well, but that would suggest that parentheses ought not be used for other purposes. I'm afraid idiomatic expressions like "get the whip out" are lost on an American like me. So the key line of the story is a bit perplexing. The last paragraph of inner thoughts shifts to the third person when the previous inner thoughts seem more natural in the first person. |
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Domino: domino at Domin-o (dot) org (dot) uk The ending was amusing, and although there were some words and phrases which I am not partial to, this was still an eminently good read. |