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Sally looked quite fetching, blinking back tears, hands twitching slightly by her sides, standing in front of my desk. "I hope you've learned your lesson about passing notes in class." "Yes, sir." "But now I'm afraid that you need to learn a more serious lesson, about comportment during a discipline session." I kept my voice mild, and my tone apologetic. After the first part of our punishment session, Sally had learned better than to argue with me, though. "Yes, sir." "I have decided to give you a level 3a, or 3b, punishment. This means either 8 strokes with the medium cane, on the bare bottom …" I allowed my gaze to fall for a second to her neat triangle of dark brown pubic hair "… or, 8 strokes with the switch, completely naked." Now I looked for a second at her chest, where the small, hard nipples of her high breasts were just visible through her thin brassiere and short shift, then back into her eyes. "Which would you prefer?" I inquired politely. "Prefer?" "Yes." "Well … the switch … sir." I raised my eyebrows. "I mean, well, " Sally's already-red face blushed deeply. "Well, the paddling really hurt. I don't know if I could take the cane. And I'm not that modest –- " Amazingly, her face got redder still. "I mean, I mean, I mean it's embarrassing, but I'm not that far from na–-. I mean …" I held her eyes for a second, and then nodded. Slowly, she lifted the shift over her head, then walked over to a chair in the corner where and folded it on top of her shorts and panties. Then, as required, she returned to stand just in front of my desk to remove her brassiere, which she also put on the chair. When she was standing naked in front of my desk, I nodded towards the back wall. "Go fetch the medium cane, please." Now her face went white. "But … but –-" "I asked for your preference; I didn't say I would honor it. It was one factor that I considered." "But …" She hunched her shoulders just slightly and bobbed her head a quarter of an inch, clearly indicating her nakedness. I nodded, and spoke apologetically. "Yes, I will have to give you additional punishment for removing your clothing without being instructed. And also for failing to obey me promptly about fetching the cane. But we can discuss that later. First let's get this part out of the way. Fetch the cane, please." I was looking straight into her eyes. Sally hesitated less than a second, then turned and walked to take the cane from the wall. |
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| Alex:
alexbirch (at) blueyonder (dot) co (dot) uk Nicely written and the girl was suitably contrite and submissive - just how I like my schoolgirls :-) But what a nasty piece of work HE was. Talk about being hung up on pedantic double talk!! I wouldn't trust him again. I really wasn't sure if this was a genuine schoolgirl punishment or a role play..it doesn't really matter except that the scenario was not too realistic for a genuine school situation, but what the hell, it's a story. Nicely written but ooooo so cruel!! |
| Steven:
js (at) smilingwithteeth (dot) com This story read more to me like a Master/slave scenario than one that might take place in a school. Why would the teacher think Sally looked "fetching?" Was the teacher enjoying these punishments? I got mixed signals from this story and I am not sure which way to go with it. Stories that try and mesh two distinct dynamics together rarely work for me. It's kind of like trying to mix oil with vinegar. |
| Kris:
worsci (at) webtv (dot) net This doesn't feel quite complete to me. I'm tingly knowing she's going to be punished, and I like the way the instructor sternly makes his/her point. I might be more convinced it was coming of age if he noticed in some way that the girl's body was ripening, but there isn't really any description or reference to an age discrepancy between characters. This could just as easily be adults roleplaying, or a professor and college student. The author has done a good job of being succint while including some nice details, but not fully explored the potential of the story. |
| Zad:
zadigskiz (at) yahoo (dot) com This is a well written story, the characters are well developed, there is good continuity. But the story centers on the desires of the adult. It would have been much more interesting if there had been more focus on the feelings of the teenager. |