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| Trainer David Lena davidlena5 (at) googlemail (dot) com Category: Historical There is a slight connection
with real events but otherwise a pure fantasy; even a prettifying one.
The office walls are covered with maps and nautical charts hiding yellow wallpaper peeling at the edges. The only furniture is a large desk and chair. A man in a green uniform with many decorations is sitting at the desk while on the other side a woman in a nightdress is standing stiffly at attention. The man is jabbing his finger angrily at a pile of small squares of coarse paper covered with densely written ideograms. "I found this in your room yesterday. Encrypted messages." "No." "Then what?" Nervous and stuttering: "It's a letter to my parents." "We would never allow you to send a letter. Explain." "I don't know. I can't." "You do know insubordination must be punished." The woman steps forward and bends across the desk. The man stands up and takes off his belt. He rolls the nightgown up to reveal a bare bottom. "Read." "Please?" "READ." "'Dear Mum.'" "WRONG!". A scream as the man lashes the woman's buttocks with the belt. "You know you have no mother." "Please, I do remember." "Continue reading." "'Dear Mum and Dad.'" "WRONG!" A second cry. "No father either." "'I miss you both so much.'" "LIE!" Another stroke. "How can you miss people who don't exist?" "'I know you will never stop looking for me.'" "Haven't I shown you the newspaper clippings?" the man brings the belt down as he says each word. "The police think you are dead. Your parents think you are dead." "'They kidnapped me on the way to school. I didn't run away.'" "Kidnapped! NO!" After the shriek of pain: "You are our guest here." "'I am being held at the Intelligence College in north-east Pyongyang.'" "Why did you give such details? Do you expect your so-called…", another lash, "…self-defence forces to rescue you?" A shake of the head. "If the Japanese colonialists try to come here again we will drive them into the sea." "'They are making me train spies in our culture.'" "Spies! A slur…", a harder stroke than before, "…on our brave young men." "'The only other person I see is Colonel Lee. He teaches me the Juche ideology and beats me when I break their rules.'" A grim smile: "After so many lies this is accurate." "'I am well but often hungry.'" "There are no shortages!". Another blow. "Don't repeat such nonsense." "'I'm sorry I wasn't there to help you with the rice crop.'" "Japanese farmers get many subsidies. They don't need your help." The belt whips down. "The socialist workers and peasants need your help." "'Love from your daughter Hitomi.'" The hardest lashes yet punctuate each word: "Not! Daughter! Anymore!". "That life is dead." After this there is only the sound of sobbing for a minute or two. "Please, it's enough. I won't write any more letters." The man ponders this for a moment. "One more, addressed to the Eternal President and explaining the anti-imperialist struggle and the real conditions of your life here. Then we will discuss what you have written." |
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| Steven:
js (at) smilingwithteeth (dot) com I had a difficult time with this story, because of the lack of chemistry or caring between the spanker and spankee. The author did paint a good picture of the scene so I could easily see in my mind what was going on. I'm not sure what the author felt while writing this or what he or she intended for others to feel. I only felt a bit sad. |
| Alex:
alexbirch (at) blueyonder (dot) co (dot)uk It's such a pleasure as a reader to get stories which break the mould a little bit and this one does just that. A nightmare scenario of a Japanese girl who no longer 'exists' outside the community in which she has been forcibly detained...and punished for trying to claim otherwise. The dialogue is chillingly credible when an authoritarian regime holds human beings in its thrall, and the story was very gripping..and sad. Very well written indeed. |
| CK:
CrimsnKid6 (at) aol (dot) com This story has a definite Orwellian feel to it, reminding me a little of O'Brien's conversations with imprisoned and tortured Winston Smith in the novel 1984. I think this narrative might actually have worked better without the identifying details given. Change the details of time, place, nationality and/or ideology and it could be set in Nazi Germany, Stalinist Russia, current day Guantanamo Bay or even Korea itself seventy years ago with the characters' nationalities reversed. The strapping itself isn't the focus of the story, it's merely the way that the physical control of the oppressive government's ruthless officer is demonstrated in an attempt to gain psychological control over a desperately resisting victim. The scary thing, as in 1984, is that it appears to be working–which makes the story itself rather disconcerting, as it's presumably meant to be. |
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