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| I Don't Wan'a Spanking Mary Francen gemcollector2001 (at) yahoo (dot) com Category: Parody Tribute This song followed the first one on "Uncle
Radio" and it is one of my favorites so I decided to try and come up
with a parody, these aren't as easy to do as I thought they would be!
I don’t wan’a spanking, the original song being I don’t want to live on the moon sung by Kermit the frog. Well I’d like to say I aint getting a spankin from Mommy Yes I’d like to say it aint so, but I don’t like to fib I don’t like the taste of Mommies soap I’d like to travel under the sea, but I don’t think it would help. I might stay for a day. But I don’t think I’d like to live there, I would miss the snuggles I get in Mommy’s lap. So I’ll make a wish on a star, and hope my spankin aint to bad, cause I don’t wanna spankin. |
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| Alex:
alexbirch (at) blueyonder (dot) co (dot) uk Ah another parody. Well again I'm afraid I don't know the original so I can't hum it and see if it works. It seems a little more imaginative than the last parody I reviewed. Yeah fine |
| CK:
CrimsnKid6 (at) aol (dot) com I'm not familiar with the original song being parodied here, so I'm discussing it within that restriction. As far as this song goes it sweetly reflects the ambivalent feelings of a child who doesn't like being spanked by his mother but overall accepts the discipline because he wants and needs the more positive (and much less painful) aspects of her loving care. The obvious limitation of this work is that it has a short, simple song to parody so it ends up being short and simple itself. It is fun to think of Kermit the Frog singing this song in an ageplay context with Miss Piggy in the "Mommy" role. I've always imagined that she spanked Kermit on occasion… |
| Zad:
zadigskiz (at) yahoo (dot) com This is a very good idea and a very good start. But it needs more work, the words don't match the melody of the song. The chorus should be expanded, and it would help if there were more verses. |
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Domino: domino at Domin-o (dot) org (dot) uk I liked the concept but think it needs more work. |