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My Bottoms ON FIRE
Stephen E. Richard
stephenrichard1973@gmail.com

Category: Parody Tribute

Parody of:   KISS - Heavens on Fire

OK Gene Simmons I am not, but here you go
 
I look at you and my bottom burns hot, I felt its temperature rise
I got it on the bare, gave me what I earned, there's tears in my eyes
It's getting numb, baby you made me cry
You spanked me the way you told me you would give me what I need when I need a spanking
Just let me rub more and you'll never have to spank me again
 
Chorus:
Feel my heat takin' you higher, burn with me, my Bottoms's on fire
Paint the sky with red bottoms, angel cry, my Bottoms's on fire
 
I got a fever ragin' on my bottom, you make me rub and shake
Baby please stop, dont take the panties down not more, rub it like a Genie's lamp
You're comin' closer to me with that paddle, I can hear you swat on your hand
You drive me crazy when you start to spank
You could put the devil over your knees
 
chorus
 
Oho my Bottoms's on fire, oho my Bottoms's on fire, oho
 
It's getting numb, baby you made me cry
You spanked me the way you told me you would give me what I need when I need a spanking
Just let me rub more and you'll never spank me again
Readers Comments:
Alex:  alexbirch (at) blueyonder (dot) co (dot) uk

Yet another parody but I think I know the original to this and the attempt is a little more intricate than some of the others I've read. This is quite good
Winks:  irishwinks (at) bresnan (dot) net

This is a nice entry into a popular category.  With a quick tempo and heated it lyrics, it nicely portrays a bottom's anxiety during an erotic spanking.  I especially liked the pleading and this promise: "Just let me rub more and you'll never have to spank me again."

Yeah, right.  :)
Zad:  zadigskiz (at) yahoo (dot) com

This is a good try.  The parody comes close to matching the actual lyrics.  And there are some cute things here.

But the parody seems to be begging for no more spanking, whereas the song is begging for more fire.  The parody should follow the song, it should be begging for more spanking not less.

Domino:  domino at Domin-o (dot) org (dot) uk

Parody can be very difficult to do well.  Capturing the essence of a song, poem or story, giving it a twist and managing to fit it into the rhythm and flow of the original is a demanding task.

This parody didn't quite manage to scan all the time, but it was a very good and lengthy attempt and listening to the original I could at least fit most of the lines in.